"This is cadet 2344 and I am about to land on the island now! Pls reply" There was no response and all I could hear was sizzles. "Repeat.I am ....."The mountains look sheer from the sea, what is in the island, I questioned myself. I grew more getting more and more excited as I neared to landing on the beach...
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Hello Chun Yi! What a lovely picture you have! I think your story may progress on in a way that you were stranded on a unknown island because you lost connection from your mate. However, in the end, you were saved in the nick of the time by your mates.:D
ReplyDeletehey Chun yi, they picture and the setting brings a sense of excitement to the readers and i feel that the story will progress to a more adventurous aspect as the mountains and seas depict so.
ReplyDeleteI think that the story would be about you reaching the island, only to find that everyone perished due to an recent yet undocumented volcanic eruption.(Lol isn't your blog called natural disasters and astronomic events?)You became stranded on that island for quite a long time, before finding out that the real cause of volcanic eruptions(contrary to popular belief)was that humans were constantly mining. Eventually you were rescued.
ReplyDeleteCaptivating setting which brings a sense of adventure to the reader's heart. The location brings adventure and exploration to mind. P.S. the word is static not sizzles.
ReplyDeleteI think your story would be about an adventure. Maybe the character in the story was in a mission to retrieve something from the island.I THINK the story would be really interesting and exciting.
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